Good Example: Application for Violet Dubrey

[Violet Dubrey]

::Steps into the office of the Applications Clerk and looks around nervously:: Hello... ::smiles shyly:: My name is Violet...Violet Dubrey and I am looking to join your guild. ::Shuffles around nervously and bites her lower lip:: ummm, the holy cleric Quasha Lavarte is my sponsor and mentor.

::Slips her application into the little wooden crate:: please give me considerations for your guild, I don't require much. I plan to be a cleric soon and hope to be dedicating my life to the assistance of our people. I hope to reform all those sinning rogues who rob and steal ::nods righteously:: I understand this is the best place to start on helping those poor lost souls reform their ways and see Cory's forgiving light ::darker stare:: or Ben's justice for their wicked ways should they not reform.

::smiles nervously again and begins to fidget:: Thank you for your time, you can find me at the following address should you need to send a messenger (http://www.darkgrimoire.com/cshow190235.html)

[Quasha]

*steps in to check with the clerk and sees Violets application* Och now here's a good example of a proper application *nods vigorously in approval* gives a good sense of personality and character. Though I did tell ye once that ye convert more scoundrels with plat & honey.. *mumbles off a bit under her breath and tsks a little in mock disappointment before clearing her throat and continuing* Violet if ye doona mind I would like to leave this here for others to see. *smiles fondly* The only other thing I would say is, as an initiate still, ye may need to level a bit before we vote on this. I suggest ye be active in yer training *gives a serious look and tilts her head head a bit* If the officers see ye active and ye meet as many guild members as possible Im sure ye have a true chance at being excepted. *nods in satisfaction while shuffling through her papers before walking out whistling a ditty*


Ooc: This has good descriptive rp structure. Giving a clear indication of personality and expression. We look for this so if your applying make sure you put some thought into it. Just saying *nods* or *smiles* sometimes is fine but adding a bit more description to your actions helps others respond in kind creating a much richer rp experience. I do understand IG sometimes it happens since we are often slightly hurried but here definitely it needs to have a bit more flourish so we can get a good idea of what the applicant is thinking, feeling etc..

[Alanna]

*Hums as she happens to be passing by the Application office and takes a peek inside* Hmm...what do we have here? *Picks up an application from the desk and reads it* Violet..Dubrey. *Smiles warmly as she reads the rest of the application, sitting on the corner of the desk as she does, nodding slowly as she murmurs under her breath* Well, Violet, first of all let me say welcome indeed it is meet you dear. I am Alanna, sister to the rogue Seragil Shadowsong. I do hope to talk to you at some point and would offer to help in any way I can even if only in advice *grins and laughs softly* Feel free to seek me out anytime dear. *puts the papers back neatly and strides out the door, her face already growing impassive as she heads off to train herself*

[Sylvana]

*having a sneaky look around, while nobody's about, Syl pokes her nose into the application office. With an air of nonchalance, but a cautious look over her shoulder, she checks the large cupboard, then has a swift looks through the desk drawers* Good, no signs of illicit drinking on the job, *chuckles to herself* Though they'd probably hide it somewhere a nosy cleric like me wouldn't find it.

*Taking a seat in the large chair behind the desk, she swivels from side to side, her legs swinging back and forth, causing her to giggle*

*About to get up and take her leave, she spies a paper on the desk, so surreptitiously spins it around. Her eyes widen in delight and a broad smile spreads across her face, as she reads through Violet's application. Nodding vigorously, she clasps her hands and murmurs* Excellent, another cleric to help keep these sneaky rogues in check. *chuckling softly to herself* Although I don't really credit our chances.

*Having one last spin in the chair, Syl replaces the paper carefully and with a final glance around scurries out of the room*